Thursday, November 16, 2006

Pluie d'eau (Stéphanie & Caro)

3 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

je distingue deux choses : le nom, sa forme

le nom, je suis ok.

la forme, pour le moment n'est pas gérée, même si il y a une idée...

n'oubliez pas le travail global sur l'expression de la pluie, les stries, le fond de pluie, sur lequel vous posez cette marque.

2:26 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I love the simplicity and purity of this name and idea.

The graphics of both need refining/work. They are both a bit rough/crude at the moment.
The raindrop and relationship with the O is poor/uncomfortable.

Think sophistication, purity, heaven...

Look at relationship of sizes/scale. The Right version is preferable to the left, looks more like a raindrop but refine it.

How might it be animated in advertising, web use? Can it be 3 dimentional, embossed, used as a sign?

Can it be even more 'heavenly', glowing? or reflective using silver metallic foil or matt and gloss UV varnish effects?

Or matt etching on a gloss glass bottle or vice-versa?

Nice!

Paul

2:41 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I agree... please don't forget the brand territory work with the lines/dots, trust me it can be an incredible source of communication elements

3:21 AM  

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